Hope for a home-final edit
This is my final edit of ''Hope for a home'' documentary. It lasts seven minutes and after finishing it I had sent it out again to Exposure and DePaul , did surveys and focus groups to get feedback.
Audience feedback
This is a focus group that I have done to get some audience feedback . It is a recording of my classmates' opinions after watching my final edit.
Proffessional feedback-BBC
In these two pictures I have attached the professional feedback I had collected after sending my final edit to Exposure.Fran has asked her friend Adam , who is an editor at BBC Master Chef to have a look and this is his opinion on my edit.
Hope for a Home : Final edit (after the feedback)
After receiving the feedback I had decided that I wanted to act upon it so I had made some of the changes mentioned earlier on by the BBC editor because I thought they helped me to improve it more.This is now my final edit !